When I look forward I see nothing. Should I live my life Always waiting? Should I move on And try to find something better? I wish I could. I wish I wasn't afraid of losing you. Why is it never my turn? Why am I so hard to love? I wish I was worth the effort. I want to be your 'something better' But you won't let me try. You are blind. Stuck in your selfish habit. I know we could do better. I wish you would let me show you. Here is your final chance. What will you do with it? |
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Uhm yeah. Here is an example of my poetry.
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there's definately a lot of emotion in there.
more.
It really does mean a lot.
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The way to gain a good reputation, is to endeavor to be what you desire to appear - Socrates
A great lover is not one who romances a different woman every night; a great lover is one who romances the same woman for a lifetime ~ Chinese Proverb
Awesome job.
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"Theres a reason for child abuse. Stop talking."
-- Mr. Card [link]
Glad you like.
I'm sure it's an emotion that many people can relate to.
The poem just screams that men are cruel... And it also screams 'love me I've got emotion in my words!!!'
Nice, keep them coming! (never thought I'd ever like a poem... I changed my mind!)
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RIP George.
You will be loved forever.
I'm not sure I can tell you how much your comment means.
I'm glad that it came across the way I intended.
I'm so glad you like it!
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RIP George.
You will be loved forever.
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